Shakespeare for the Community

Published on 9 May 2025 at 20:10

Many people hate reading Shakespeare. Yes, that is the truth. Everyone knows Shakespeare and knows how competent — more like how much of a genius — he is at crafting language. However, in our spare times, we would still rather choose to grab a page flipper rather than read old English. For some people, old English is more than just excessively convoluted diction: it seems as if it is completely irrelevant to their lives at all. If reading Shakespeare is so boring and difficult, then why is it mandatory to read at least one of Shakespeare's plays in high school?

The answer is quite simple: he allows us to understand who we once were and who we currently are. Simply put, our experiences have not changed. For the issues and topics that we see today, he saw during the 1600s. The only thing that is different is how he expresses what he sees. He uses old English. We speak in modern English. Now this is where some people get frustrated and quit.

 ðŸ‘‹ Our goal is to empower students to see the beauty in Shakespeare’s writing, as well as see how relevant his works are for modern society. Further, engaging with Shakespeare helps us appreciate the beauty and flexibility of the English language.

Under our main focus of Shakespeare for the Community, we have carried out many small events that lead to our main focus:

2023 ELA/Shakespeare Winter Camp

Images of our event:

To those in middle and high school, our camp's resources are posted down below for you.

2024 Shakespeare Spring Camp

Flashcards Game

In this game, the students had to sort the cards in the order of the narrative for Macbeth. We designed these cards to ensure that students understood the story before we delve deep into Shakespeare’s art of writing. The game is attached down below:

Lord of the Rings & Macbeth Screenplay

Take a moment to appreciate a screenplay that combines Act 3, Scene IV of Macbeth with the fantasy world of The Lord of the Rings. This creative fusion was a class assignment for my ELA IB HL course during my grade 11 year. Our task was to rewrite a scene from Macbeth in a genre of our choice. My group and I chose to reimagine Macbeth within the context and plot of The Lord of the Rings, infusing it with elements of fantasy.

What started as a class project quickly grew into a passionate endeavor. My group and I worked furiously on this project, from brainstorming to writing the script to creating the props/setting to dressing ourselves up to filming to cutting the videos to recording voice overs to HAND DRAWING the animations to putting everything together and adding special effects to, finally, putting together a humorous and fascinating screenplay --- and watching it about 100+ times.

So why Lord of the Rings? This is in fact a question that I want you to percolate on. Try to discover the nuances and special parallels between Gollum and Macbeth. Hint: What does the double-character Gollum reflect about Macbeth's double-sided nature?

Would you like to follow along what we are saying? Here is our script:

Written and performed by: Michelle Huang, Bingxuan Yang & Xueqi Yang

FADE IN:

Animation:

  • Voice over when introducing map of Lord of the Rings
  • Camera following an owl (foreshadowing evil to come)
    • Sits on branch; hoots; flies away (parallels Fleance)
  • Zoom in: gust of wind (voice over whisper from elm trees)
  • Camera zoom in on torch being extinguished
  • Setting EXT: Evening, close to nighttime (slightly darker, lighter → darker)
    • Rocky, forest setting (trees in the background & the rocks are the tables/chairs of the banquet)

Introduction:

Long, long ago, in the world where hobbits thrived… (speak alongside animation)

Dialogue:

FADE IN:

INT/EXT. [LOCATION] — Evening, rocky forest setting

Good Gollum (wearing white): Comes, comes my friends! It knows its ranks. We welcomes it to sit!

Lords: Why thank you gollum! [Separate cut]

Evil Gollum (wearing white): Bless us precious! Yes, yes, we sit above all those nasty little hobbitses. Look at us, ha! We sit with order, with order!!

Saruman: Yes, welcome, my esteemed guests! Partake in the feast prepared in your honor!

Enter Orc

Evil Gollum: Gollum, gollum. We shall play the light lord in darkness. They don’t know us, they don’t know how we have come to be.

Saruman [aside, pulls evil back to good]: Gollum! You danger us all, pull yourself together! Do not dwell in evil thoughts; we have to play the humble host!

Good Gollum: Splash us, my precious! Gollum, gollum, we shall mingles with all of you and play the humble host. Yes, yes, yes! Saruman, it shall stay in its royal chair, but soon it will greet you all!

Saruman: Oh, heavens! Say welcome to all of them for me!

Good Gollum: It responds to you with its greatest pleasure. Gollum, we shall sits in the middle of the table, yes! We shall sits here in pleasure!

Evil Gollum: You sneaky little orc, there’s BLOOOD on your face.

Orc: Aye, harvested, Banquo’s blood.

Evil Gollum: Oh, how juicy are these lines to my ear. Tell me, is he dead?

Orc: Yes, I slit his throat. No denying it, boss.

Evil Gollum: Ha! Tis too good to be true! Look what we have gotten, a death to pave for our success. We are on our way to mastery! But wait! What about his little egg? Good orc, good orc, tell me about little Fleance.

Orc: Uhhhh yea… about that… Fleanace slipped away, that sneaky rat.”

Evil Gollum: Hisssss! Dammit, we can’t trust these orcs with AnYtHiNg. There goes my hopes of a clear conscience, solid as stones, stiff as shells, sovereign as the sky. Thief, thief, thief! Now we’re tangled up in doubts and fears. We hates it, we hates it, we hates it!

Good Gollum: Our precious is safe and dead though… yes?

Orc: Yes boss. Banquo is dying in a ditch. Bleeding out from paying for Fleance’s escape.

Evil Gollum: The real serpent has slithered and is now slain, but the little worm out and about. Get out, get out, get out! We’ll talk to you tomorrow.

Good Gollum: But we feel happy fors it!

Orc Leaves

Lords: [Dumbfounded and confused expression]

Saruman: Gollum! What has gotten into you?! Pull it together this instant! Do you want them to hear your thoughts? Huh? It’s a dinner party; find joy in your servitude and do your pathetic sobbing in private.

Good Gollum: Oh gollum, gollum, we forgots about it!

[raises the cup] Cheers to good digestion, good appetites and good health!

Hobbit Lennox: Gollum, your grace, here is your seat.

(Dramatic music: Deagol appears and glides over to Gollum’s seat)

Deagol: [Sits in Gollum’s place, smirking.]

Good Gollum: [hasn’t noticed Deagol yet] What a kind offering. Only if good Deagol was present; what a kind man was he. It is but our first banquet and he does not come. Pity, pity!

Evil Gollum: Yes, yes! And all these little hobbitses, unaware of our great deeds. We must keep secret of our bloody acts.

Hobbit Ross: Why sir, his absence only insults his own honor. Will you join us though, your highness?

Evil Gollum: Oh yes we will. Gollum, gollum, these little hobbitses must not be suspicious of us.

Good Gollum: It’s full, isn’t it?

Hobbit Lennox: Here’s your empty seat, your highness.

Good Gollum: Where, where?

Hobbit Lennox: [Points to Gollum’s seat] Why here. What’s wrong, your highness?

Deagol [Stays in seat and smirks]

Good Gollum: Ahhh! Thief, thief, thief! We did not do it, not us!

[Beginning of flashback]

Location: movie location (varies)

Snippet #1:

[Good Gollum (Smeagol) and Deagol playing]

Smeagol: Deagol! You can’t catch me, HAH!

Deagol: Oh yes I can. Watch out!

Snippet #2

[Deagol finds a ring]

Deagol: What is this?

[Smeagol runs into the scene; joyful expression shifts dramatically after he sees the ring]

Smeagol: Hey, give me that ring. It’s my birthday.

Deagol: I gave you a present already. I found it, thus I shall keep it.

Smeagol: Well then. I shall take it.

Ring (Gollum is allured by the ring): [whispers to Smeagol]

Lesser than Gollum, yet greater

Not much happier than Gollum, yet much happier

(Witches circling around ring whispering; carrying cat)

Snippet #3:

[Smeagol strangles Deagol to death.  At first, Deagol is winning the fight. Afterwards, Smeagol suddenly turns evil (evil Gollum vibes) and saves himself. He chokes Deagol to death]

[End of flashback]

Deagol wears on the ring

Which one of you didst it?!

Hobbit Ross: [Concerned face] Everyone rise. The great Gollum is not well.

Evil Gollum: We didst this, liar. You are a murdererrrrrr.

Good Gollum: No! I’m not listening. Not listening. Gollum, gollum, a friend has come to greet us.

Evil Gollum: Friend! What are you saying, we have no friends. Nobody likes you, liar.

Good Gollum: [suddenly makes a vulnerable look, high camera angle] It has come to haunt us, gollum! It is here for revenge!

Evil Gollum: (low camera angle) Look at you, whatst are you doing in fear? We have no fear. We murder!

[Lords are bewildered and begin to rise]

Saruman: Everyone sit! Gollum’s suffers from this ailment since his youth… it wanes and waxes. Give shall be fine in just a moment. Ignore his presents and revel in this feast!

[Lords sit down]

Saruman [Pulls Gollum aside]: Is this who you have become? Weak? Emotional? Cowardly?

Good Gollum: No, no, no! We is braves. We dares to look at it who frightens us!

Saruman: Nonsense! This is your problem, what makes you weak. Where does it end with you? What, are you scared of your mind now? Shame on you! Enough of these tantrums. Embrace your deed and go forth dignity and strength, or embrace your destruction.

Good Gollum: [Points to his seat] Please, my precious, please look over there! Look, look! What’s it doing?!

Evil Gollum: [Towards Deagol] You sneaky little THIEF! What do you have to say? We don’t cares about it anymore. Go, go, go!

Deagol exits

Good Gollum: YES, we told it to go away, and away it goes, precious!! Ha, ha! [Jumping around]

Saruman: See what? How your foolishness, your cowardly behavior, thats disgrace to us all?

Good Gollum: Good Saruman, we sawst it with our own eyes! It was him (refers to the evil gollum), not us.

Evil Gollum: You were always a coward. Deagol hanged abovest us and sat in our seat.

Saruman: Liar! Absolutely nothing there, nothing but a worthless piece of refuse!

Evil Gollum: Gollum, gollum. Back in our happy little hobbit times, blood was shed. We murders Deagol, that filthy little hobbit, and it was dead, dead, dead. But now it creeps and crawls and rises from the dead.

Saruman: Have you forgotten about your noble friends waiting on your prescence?

Good Gollum: We’st forget. We’st forget!

Evil Gollum: And they suspect of you, Gollum. They see’st you and your filthy appearance.

Good Gollum: Not listening, not listening! Little hobbitsses, my preciouses, we mustn’t see what just happened. [looks at wine bottle] But we do lovest wine! Let’s gather and take it! To my little hobbit Deagol. [sudden camera switch to evil gollum cackling; then back to Good Gollum] Bless us and splash us! Cheers!

Lords (Hobbits in attendance): Cheers!  [Everyone drinks]

Enter Deagol

Evil Gollum [to Deagol]: BLLAHHH! Go, go! Get out of our sight! It’s blood is cold and it can’t see! Go stay in your grave you filthy little hobbit! This precious life is OURS… it’s ooouuuurrrr precious!

Good Gollum: [Murmurs to himself] Now who’s the coward?

Saruman: This is just a strange uh habit of Gollum’s. Though this debacle is spoiling our night… it’s just… little matters.

Evil Gollum: Gollum, gollum, daaaaareful gollum! We never tremble against the Russiaaaaan beaaaar, the aaaaarmed buffaaaaalo, or aaaaagrewssive cougaaaaar! You filthy hobbitsses, go, we don’t care if it becomes a goblin… or draaagon… or orc! Come, my precious, come to us! WE FEAR IT NOT!

[Deagol vanishes]

Good Gollum: [Panting and sweating] Gollum, gollum, why we are gollum again.

[to the hobbits] Please, my preciousses, remain seated. It is gollum again.

Saruman: You have been an absolute nuisance tonight, making such a spectacle of yourself.

Good Gollum: No, no! It is not us. It is him, HIM!

Evil Gollum: Shut up you fool! You coward! Where would you be without me? I saved us! I DID!

Good Gollum: Go away! You hurt us!

[escapes evil gollum] [leaps towards the hobbits] It sees it, right? The sight astonishes it, doesn’t it? Gollum, gollum, how can it keep a straight face when it has turned white with fear?

Hobbit Ross: What is such a sight, my lord?

Saruman: Apologies for this strange night, but speaking only confuses him, irritates him, and worsens his condition. Oh, noble hobbits, please leave in silence… and don’t bother about order!

[Good Gollum with alarmed expression] [Evil Gollum smirks]

Hobbit Lennox: I wish gollum good health, good night.

Saruman: Kind good night to all.

[Hobbits keep their heads down and quickly leave in an unorderly fashion] [Saruman escorts them out]

(candles on the table are blown out)

Good Gollum: [sobbing] Waiit, wait my precious hobbitsses….. Ohhh, gollum! How quickly do the hobbitsses leave us! Ohhhh ohhh!

Evil Gollum: Look who you have become. Weak. Pale. Dull. HAH. The hobbitsses needs you NOT.

[Good Gollum continues sobbing]

Evil Gollum: You filthy little creature. We needs it NOT…. [complete silence]…. ooooh, I don’t needs you anymore. I, I, I!

Good Gollum: You abandons us!

Evil Gollum: I. Don’t. Needs. You. Anymore. GO!

[Good Gollum wails louder]

Evil Gollum: [Eyes wide] GGOOOOOOOO!

[Silence] [Good Gollum is gone] [Evil Gollum slowly smirks]

[Saruman returns and is startled by Gollum’s expression]

Saruman: Gollum, you are beyond belief. What have thoust become?

[Crow caws]

Evil Gollum: [Ignores Saruman] …There’s an old saying, isn’t there? Way back in the little hobbitsses times, it says the dead have its revenge. Gravestones move, wood speaks, trees howl, while the filthy crowsses exposes the murderers.

[Hisses at the crow. It flies away] How late is it?

Saruman: It’s closer to morning… have you also lost your grasp on time is it?

Evil Gollum: [Continues to ignore Saruman] There was a hobbit short, wasn’t there? Why does that precious little hobbit refuse to comes?

Saruman: Well, did you extend an invitation?

Evil Gollum: I haven’t yets, but I will. Gollum, gollum, SPY on that filthy little hobbitsses! Ahhhh… tomorrow, I shall see the witchesses, where they shall tell me MORE about my fate! HAH, and that filthy, weak creature has left, LEFT! Oh how far I have walked in until this day! What a pity it would be to turn back. NO. It continues plans, acts, and murders!

Saruman: Gollum, retire for the night. You shall regain some sense with sleep.

Evil Gollum: Yes, let us go to sleep, my precious! We have shooed the good away, and gollum is all to ourselves now! It is still a beginner in crimes, yet it will soon become a MASTER!

[Intense music] [Evil Gollum laughs hysterically]

[Owl fly out, Elm trees are disturbed]

Do you think you understand the nuances of our play? Take a look at our original plan to see if you noticed these details!

Movie & Genre:

  • Macbeth combined with: Lord of the Rings (The Fellowship of the Ring)
    • Fantasy

Characteristics of Fantasy:

  • Mythical and imaginative creatures/fantastical characters
  • Magical forces (wizards, witches)
  • Unique & dramatic setting (author spends huge efforts crafting a new world and societal structure): huge contrast between light and dark
  • Setting is unlike Earth, incorporates imaginative/magical elements
  • Existence of supernatural elements
  • Governs with own set of rules/laws
  • A map that illustrates the landscape to the readers

Roles:

  1. Gollum as Macbeth (Good and evil)
    1. Double nature
    2. Internal conflicts- Gollum and Macbeth are both driven by intense ambition which corrupts their morals, forcing them to deviate away from any of their virtues.
    3. Tragic Deaths: Both Macbeth and Gollum’s deaths were directly a result of their obsessions; Macbeth was rightfully punished by the supernatural for committing regicide to seize the throne while Gollum’s greed landed him in the lava.
    4. Speech qualities:
      1. sibilance
      2. Quick and slow pacing
  2. Saruman as Lady Macbeth
    1. Wise, yet evil
      1. Moral Decline as a result of selfish desire for power, both indulging in betrayal of those who they were supposed to serve (Duncan and Free Peoples)
    2. Uses personal status to deceive others
      1. Cunning and effortlessly manipulative in nature
  3. Hobbits as Lennox, Ross, lords & attendants
    1. Hobbits are depicted as a genuine race & culture
  4. Orc as the First Murderer
    1. Orcs were created by the Dark Lord → naturally evil
  5. Frodo as Banquo’s ghost
    1. Frodo was brave & honorable, but manipulated by the ring
    2. Corresponds to Banquo’s loyalty towards Duncan & his slightly ambitious state (asks for his prophecies)
    3. Gollum: expresses guilt in murdering purity (ghost Frodo), but starts acting crazy when he sees the ring (worn by ghost Frodo)

Location: Fangorn forest

  • Resides Ents: old race of trees; protects the natural world
  • In context of Macbeth: embodiment of nature
    • Macbeth and Lady Macbeth’s conversation at the end of the scene could suddenly awaken the Ents → disturbing the natural order
    • Add candles maybe

How Gollum speaks:

  • Evil self addresses good self as “my love”
  • “We”, “us”,
  • Repetition of words
  • Has a really unique way of talking that breaks traditional English grammar. He likes to follow words with ‘ses’, for instance ‘hobbitses’

My Reflection

In high school, I noticed that many Chinese immigrants struggle to adapt to the English-speaking environment. What they struggled significantly with is grasping the Shakespearean texts they were taught in high school. This is what inspired me to begin this independent project of sharing Shakespeare to my community. Chinese-Canadian immigrants need a guide, someone with the experience of ELA and Shakespeare courses, to aid with their successful transition into high school ELA courses. During the winter of last year, Bingxuan and I personally developed a two-day ELA course at the Central Library. I taught Chinese immigrants tips on public speaking, reading comprehension strategies, and tips on reading Shakespeare. Many students gave positive praises after taking the course. They wanted me to teach them more, specifically on Shakespeare. The funny thing is, initially, I thought none of the immigrants found my course useful. None of them were actively answering my questions — and I was internally desperate for them to respond, yet they just sat in their seats, staring at me blankly. Later, one of the students timidly told me that I was speaking too fast in English. I experienced a rare moment of epiphany. No wonder none of them were responding. Teaching is really a double-sided learning process for both the students and I. And because they wanted to learn more, I gladly continued to serve their needs.

Early this year, I collaborated with two other LinkCC members — Qinkai and Bingxuan — and taught a two-day spring course to guide Chinese immigrants through the process of analyzing Shakespeare, specifically Macbeth. We explored the methods of tackling such a heavy Shakespearean text. We guided the Chinese immigrants through the process of not only understanding Shakespeare, but also finding wonder and awe in his works. I felt like I was opening a door for them, mentoring them through the process of grasping Macbeth. In our presentations, we weren’t just simply exploring the different themes of Macbeth. We were peeling back the layers and layers behind each act and scene. Though someone can argue that we didn’t analyze deep enough (I noticed that in literature, there isn’t really a limit to how much you can analyze from a text, because every well written text just has too much substance to it), there was something that we did that was a success. We ignited a spark of curiosity within these Chinese immigrants. A few of the immigrants even stayed behind and praised our remarkable analysis of Shakespeare. Ultimately, this spring camp was just as successful as the winter camp. However, after the course was over, after I returned to school, I noticed that there are still students who find Shakespeare daunting. It was fear that held them back from becoming passionate in Shakespeare. So together, with Bingxuan, we decided to embark on another ambitious journey.

We’ve decided present the beauty of Shakespeare by blending his texts with works from different genres to create unique, double-genre videos — videos that we translate into Mandarin and post to numerous different platforms online. This idea stemmed from an ELA IB class assignment, where my group and I reimagined a scene from Macbeth by merging it with elements from another genre/movie. When we watched every group’s screenplay, I was completely fascinated by each screenplay, how they seamlessly integrated two completely distinct genres into one, and how this inter-genre work allowed me to appreciate Shakespeare’s brilliance through a different lens of curiosity and marvel. And so, I’m ambitiously creating more of these inter-genre videos to inspire a broader audience with the wonders of Shakespeare. Find Shakespeare boring? What about a fantasy version of Macbeth’s Act III Scene IV? Through this creative approach of combining different genres with Shakespeare, I hope to rip away the fear that students associate with Shakespeare, and replace it with curiosity. I hope to make Shakespeare's works more compelling and fascinating for those who find them challenging to understand.

I would like to acknowledge all those who worked with us on this project:

  1. Qinkai Li, Gr 12 Sir Winston Churchill High School student who volunteered as an instructor for the Macbeth Spring Camp
  2. Selina Zhou, first-year university student who volunteered as instructor for the Macbeth Winter Camp
  3. Bolo Wang, Gr 12 Access Academy student who volunteered as technical support for both of our camps
  4. Elina Yuan, Gr 10 Queen Elizabeth student who volunteered as technical support for both of our camps
  5. Cheryl Zhang, first-year university student who volunteered as student supporter for the Macbeth Winter Camp
  6. Michelle Huang, Gr 12 Sir Winston Churchill High School student who re-wrote the Macbeth Screenplay with us.

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